The exercise is called Voodoo and gives a strict set of parameters to be followed. I followed these, then heavily revised what I had done. As ever, this needs a lot more revision and adding to.
SwoopingA ruin, a ruin of boulders next to
the sky, the sky, the sky, all over today.
The crumpled newspaper lies on
the seat opposite. The woman snuffles,
nuzzles the tissue. A falcon glares ...