Coral and kitten-dad

It's NaPoWriMo again this month so I'm having a go and these are the first two efforts since I didn't get round to posting yesterday:

April 1st
The suggestion was a lune, a new form to me.  Three lines of 5-3-5 syllables, or 5-3-5 words.  This is untitled and quite raw, unedited.

Cold coral is like coal

in the mind

not in the solid earth

April 2nd

Family portrait is the theme.  This too has had little in the way of revising, so I'll keep it on file, as it were, for further examination later.

Kitten-dad

Early on mashed banana in porridge

you moved on to fish fingers even though

I wanted you to eat healthy meanwhile nursery

forgot you were off dairy products for two weeks

one mistake plenty of mistakes on

my part too ...

Caveat: ill-health, forgetfulness, lack of creativity, or life - in that order - may stop me posting a new one each day!