Dark
blue pillowcase
yellow towel blowing
in mild breezes heavy
branch acting as washing line
pole carefully crafted by woodsmen last
spring only looking back one year already nostalgia.
A hay(na)ku consists of a three-line stanza, where the first line has one word, the second line has two words, and the third line has three words. As you can see I have elongated the original idea and continued up to eight words. Rules? Ha! But no claims to a polished poem, a draft waiting to be revised.
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