Friday, 10 April 2020

Day 10 Time stretches

blue pillowcase 
yellow towel blowing 
in mild breezes heavy 
branch acting as washing line 
pole carefully crafted by woodsmen last 
spring only looking back one year already nostalgia. 

A hay(na)ku consists of a three-line stanza, where the first line has one word, the second line has two words, and the third line has three words. As you can see I have elongated the original idea and continued up to eight words. Rules? Ha! But no claims to a polished poem, a draft waiting to be revised.

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